To improve: 1. Background noise is really distracting. This results in a rather basic reading from the screen presentation. It is really obvious it is being read also which is restricting your marks.
2. Where are the clips/trailers that you could have embedded - how does this relate to key moments from your film? You need to add these in to gain the higher marks to provide examples (remember P E E) so we understand how you are comparing them. WHat about reference to 'stock characters' from Thrillers from your research?
3. What about the other key charcaters? This is the work of 3 students remember...hence why you will be marked so harshly for quality and quantity.
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1. Background noise is really distracting. This results in a rather basic reading from the screen presentation. It is really obvious it is being read also which is restricting your marks.
2. Where are the clips/trailers that you could have embedded - how does this relate to key moments from your film? You need to add these in to gain the higher marks to provide examples (remember P E E) so we understand how you are comparing them. WHat about reference to 'stock characters' from Thrillers from your research?
3. What about the other key charcaters? This is the work of 3 students remember...hence why you will be marked so harshly for quality and quantity.
WT D